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STARTING FROM PAUMANOK

Old Age Can Be Heroic

Searching for Absolutes

Nice, Stupid People

World Poem

 

 

OLD AGE CAN BE HEROIC

(For Philip Kransberg.)

 

My grandfather, when he was young

and working as a junkman, could

carry cast iron stoves

across the room, his arms spread-eagled,

the weight across his shoulders.

 

As he grew blindly older,

walking itself became a matter

of carrying a great burden.

 

Crossing the street, retired,

he passed men working

and fell until he spread his

arms to catch himself

at the armpits, into an

open grate.  The men who

lifted him complained

of his weight, but he,

bruised and embarrassed,

said that he forgave them.

 

 

SEARCHING FOR ABSOLUTES

 

Buying steak

I tease the bloody textures

on the plastic wrap,

admiring the droplets behind

their drip-proof seal.

Lugging my life through

self-service aisles, I

see Walt and Allen, both,

among the bargains:  Marrow

and meal, greens and glassware,

coffee spoons unmetaphoric,

5 off the price as market-

euphoric.  Intensity among

the canned goods and sweetly

scented sprays.

 

I wait with cart amid

the patient hoards

to make my declaration.

The freckle-faced girl,

her fingers bouncing over

my private things, pushes

me into double bags.  Keeper

of the gate, she calls me to account.

 

In haste I pay, wiping

the bloody scent onto my

pants, and haul myself away:

it is not for men to ask

for love or justice.

Tonight, I will think of

her freckled thighs as I

fry my meat and potatoes.

 

 

NICE, STUPID PEOPLE 

(In the hospital, Dec. ,'69.)

 

Nice, stupid people come

into my room to clean,

make beds, offer all

their sympathy in a slow

"Hello, how are you?"

 

In their broom-closet

brains the world is

locked in clear, un-

thinking patterns.

 

I lie alone in bed,

hear only voices crying

to be led, knowing people's

kindness, like their wash-

clothes, comes like an order.

If I were called "the enemy"

they would rush to see me dead.

 

 

WORLD POEM

 

It is zero but hot

inside our house and I

am absorbed in a jet of

cloud created by the vaporizer

we have bought.  I aim it at

you across the dim-lit living

room and you complain, call me to

the screen.  Plugged in, we watch

men circling in space two-hundred

thousand miles away:  Picture

the earth full-blown, swirling

in darkness-the cloudy globe

we see in color from Apollo

and the serene vacuum that

surrounds three captured men.

Picture their vital signs

detected and transmitted to

us across decaying darkness.

 

Zero outside: we

keep within our capsuled

world, gazing at the

lunar sea, or across

the icy fields where

the fence posts are fangs

devouring the moon.